Ah, finding your happy place. Every teen goes through it.
While looking at the piece, the choice of atmosphere is well made in putting on the right tone for the character's emotional state of confusion (if that was the initial intent), also, the umbral contrast beneath the character adds a sense of forboding danger or a dismal sense of hope for what seems a dark and gloom filled story...it doesn't help that he has bat wings, especially with child prejudice at school...bastard thug of a bully.

In conclusion: A captivating piece that tells a story right from the get go. These are the best kind of art pieces, ones that evolve as more people try to enterpret them in their own way, sharing ideas on stories that this piece would inspire writers to make. Truly an excellent gift for anyone in the career path of an artist. Well done.

The linear perspective on this piece works well to draw your eye to the character and the silhouette of the figure is very striking. It creates a very dynamic and dramatic scene, and the mood and intensity of it is very well translated. However, you sort of lose the wings against the background - making the membranous sections more transparent or outlining the edges with the white of the moon will help contrast and define the figure and wings so you don't lose it. Throwing some of those highlights on the buildings could help set the tone of the piece, as well as tie it all together as a work.